David, it's not only how you tell the story that moves readers along, but also the way that you "plated" (i.e., formatted) the content that makes it easy to read. I liked, in the beginning, how you followed a longer paragraph with a short one, or maybe even a sentence. Dialogue too well formatted, inviting the reader to continue on. Well done.
Bantering 🔥 bonfires batgirls win the day crippling krypton clones with microbe spit balls.
Now what happens when the mother ship returns? Sybil’s gone. Priestess of prophecy. ET microbes start mushroom wars—microscopic organisms slow revenge. The race to conquest is not over yet. Heck scientists haven’t even conquered cancer or syphilis. There is something out there and yet medical research is being defunded. What’s with that?. X files shredded. Another reason to keep watching the sky and keep writing.
David, it's not only how you tell the story that moves readers along, but also the way that you "plated" (i.e., formatted) the content that makes it easy to read. I liked, in the beginning, how you followed a longer paragraph with a short one, or maybe even a sentence. Dialogue too well formatted, inviting the reader to continue on. Well done.
Bantering 🔥 bonfires batgirls win the day crippling krypton clones with microbe spit balls.
Now what happens when the mother ship returns? Sybil’s gone. Priestess of prophecy. ET microbes start mushroom wars—microscopic organisms slow revenge. The race to conquest is not over yet. Heck scientists haven’t even conquered cancer or syphilis. There is something out there and yet medical research is being defunded. What’s with that?. X files shredded. Another reason to keep watching the sky and keep writing.
Thank you for the notes.
I always love a good alien story. Great work David.
Your style of storytelling is just wonderful.
Nice way to start my day! Neat story, which reminds me of my best friend and I.