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David Perlmutter's avatar

#BrothersKrynn.

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Warren Brown's avatar

Thanks for a great story, David.

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Yana Bostongirl's avatar

I really enjoyed this story David - I don't think I have read something like this from you - I wasn't expecting Candance to be an elf - pretty cool 👍

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Maryam( Si_Chi_Neh's avatar

♾️👍✍️👌

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Pennie R. S. Nelson's avatar

That was an awesome story David. Well done.

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E.R. Flynn's avatar

A very well crafted tale! I love the allegory you built into this.

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Catherine Brown's avatar

When I started reading I really began to worry, thinking it was a true story. As soon as I realized it was fiction then fun began. Great story. Thanks

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Jenny Homan's avatar

Awesome! Perfect for Warrior Wednesday. Or the 'make dragons interesting again' prompt (by I'm can't remember who) from last week... I'm glad I took a chance on this one. Well done David!

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𝓛𝓪𝓣𝓪𝓷𝔂𝓪's avatar

💋💋💋💋

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

This is really well-written. Employs that classic epic structure. You should screenplay up this story. Make some cash in Tinseltown.

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Melissa Scala's avatar

I am loving Lady Candace - what a great story!

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Joshua Price's avatar

Well crafted and greatly executed.

I like the morality.

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Really enjoyed this, David. Delightful and allegorical in equal measure 👍🏼

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