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Yana Bostongirl's avatar

Bold & unapologetic - kept me hooked the whole way :)

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Douglas McClenaghan's avatar

Hilarious and horrifying. Merry Christmas from Lizzie Borden!

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E.R. Flynn's avatar

Ghastly fun! I wonder how we can get you a time machine so you can jump back to the 70s and get that job writing for Creepy and Eerie magazines?

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Virginia Neely's avatar

Not sure I liked the ending, though I totally agree with the sentiments.

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Jill Ebstein's avatar

Talk about attitude:

“Well,” I say, quietly and firmly, “it ain’t gonna happen. Get out of here before I decide to kill you-again.”

David, your characters are imbued with a strong sense of self, and an even stronger imagination. If only the world were that way... thanks for sharing.

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Clay N. Ferno's avatar

Haha fantastic! Love it!

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Al Bellenchia's avatar

Well now…😳

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Nick Richards's avatar

Well done!

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DERICK AMUSTRONG's avatar

This is definitely coming in late..but Merry Christmas my friend.

Thanks for grabbing my attention with this smart piece.❤️

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ClownWorld Shakespeare's avatar

That's the way to end a short story, with a definite twist!

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Janice Anne Wheeler's avatar

Unmatched creativity, commentary and shocking fun.

So impressed.

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Giulietta Passarelli's avatar

Cool Merry Christmas David!

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JS Hyder's avatar

Well Christmas is for ghostly tales... so perfect :)

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David MacGregor's avatar

Something to think about as I leaf through my kindle copy of America Toons In. Hey Lizzie can you spare me for a minute?

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