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Switter’s World's avatar

My kind of crew!

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Yana Bostongirl's avatar

Whoa - the hole turned out to be a trap - then the bad guys fought each other - then the good guys worked together and got out of the hole they were trapped in - what a roller coaster ride!

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Jill Ebstein's avatar

David, where do you come up with this stuff? You are the original think outside the box or maybe the universe. Here are a few sentences that really caught my attention:

1.Candy was the last of us to get her powers, and they came through a ring she got as a reward for rescuing a dying alien hero from peril,

2. "Scylla and Charybdis, the sister-and-brother delinquent-cum-magician duo"

and finally, very little is obvious, though you say it is:

3. You get five female superheroes inside a hole in the ground, each of them stronger than a whole army of men, and the solution is obvious: punch our way out…

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Bill Adler's avatar

A Hole Lotta Trouble is a fun story. I love the characters.

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