David, I liked the pacing and visual spacing here which felt less dense than some of your other work. Did you make modifications or am I imagining? Again your creativity shines.
You know what I like about this? It can be the story of many of my experiences in life. I want to say, “I am Cerberus!”. Lol, truly this was a really good story and brought wonderful, touchable visuals with it. Thank you!
Hi Cerberus. I envy your owner so much! Why I don't have such a wit, joyous, victorious Cerberus!? Please give my regards to your owner, Mr. Perlmutter.
Thank you for reading and liking my comment. I really love our writer's trick with Cerberus. He gave this mythic dog a much better job than guarding the Hades.
An immensely enjoyable read. :)
I agree!
David, I liked the pacing and visual spacing here which felt less dense than some of your other work. Did you make modifications or am I imagining? Again your creativity shines.
Thank you, Jill. Yes: I did modify the text slightly, but not much.
Hearing that from you is a great pleasure, Simon.
You know what I like about this? It can be the story of many of my experiences in life. I want to say, “I am Cerberus!”. Lol, truly this was a really good story and brought wonderful, touchable visuals with it. Thank you!
"I Am Cerberus" is actually the working title of her origin story, which I hope to write and publish in full one of these days.
Michelangelo's Last Judgement and a Damned Soul... https://cwspangle.substack.com/p/michaelangelos-last-judgement-and
That's a fun story.
Thank you. But, obviously, Cerberus didn't think it was "fun"...
Oh my! Puppy and Cerberus?
Hi Cerberus. I envy your owner so much! Why I don't have such a wit, joyous, victorious Cerberus!? Please give my regards to your owner, Mr. Perlmutter.
Thank you for reading and liking my comment. I really love our writer's trick with Cerberus. He gave this mythic dog a much better job than guarding the Hades.
So well done!
Great adventure, love the humor!
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Cute story, David.
It's as good the second time as it is the first. Can you set up a tip jar?
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Your choice. Please let others know about them as well.