What happened to chapter V ? Did it get censored with Dinny and the wolf Sawyer. Toss me a bonafide answer. I was firmly gelling with delight throughout the scenes. Good howl of a read. Owwoooo.
Though it may be a fantastical setting, Dinny's story is relatable in a real life context - am glad Dinny got recognized in the end - by Mrs Goldfishberg
Dinsdale’s journey is both humorous and heartfelt, and I loved how you brought the animation world to life with such vivid characters. Your blend of wit and action kept me engaged throughout—another great piece.
Did I detect an homage to Max Fleisher at the very beginning? Story drew me right in, enough so I didn't do other things I 'should' be doing. "Electronic claptrap" very endearing to the old. We had a strong preference for melody. Mrs Goldfishberg so well drawn.. I think I've met her.
Have you read or even better listened to Jasper Fford books about PDRs? Persons of dubious reality? Main character is Jack Sprat, who insists he’s not a fairy tale character. But… I love those.
I need a little context here. Is this a screenplay? Short story? Is it part of something longer?
A short story. I tend to write stories about the same characters as if they were a television series, though.
What happened to chapter V ? Did it get censored with Dinny and the wolf Sawyer. Toss me a bonafide answer. I was firmly gelling with delight throughout the scenes. Good howl of a read. Owwoooo.
The roman numerals represents transitions in the story, not chapters. It's like how some people will use ### for that.
But the transition V is missing in action.
OH. Thank you- I'll fix it.
I wait for clarity. Thanks.
Though it may be a fantastical setting, Dinny's story is relatable in a real life context - am glad Dinny got recognized in the end - by Mrs Goldfishberg
I was interested in their relationship too.
I wish I had thought of that title!! Excellent
Dinsdale’s journey is both humorous and heartfelt, and I loved how you brought the animation world to life with such vivid characters. Your blend of wit and action kept me engaged throughout—another great piece.
Cute story, David. Very different, and I love the title! Chairman of the bored! 😁😁😁🤣🤣
Your imagination is amazing and descriptions vivid. Fav: Mrs Goldfishberg.
Those Dog darned CGI ers, I knew they would be trouble from the start!
Did I detect an homage to Max Fleisher at the very beginning? Story drew me right in, enough so I didn't do other things I 'should' be doing. "Electronic claptrap" very endearing to the old. We had a strong preference for melody. Mrs Goldfishberg so well drawn.. I think I've met her.
Delightful! This unique little gem is just brilliant. I'm happy for Dinny!
Have you read or even better listened to Jasper Fford books about PDRs? Persons of dubious reality? Main character is Jack Sprat, who insists he’s not a fairy tale character. But… I love those.
You craft some really impressive dialogue! Great job!
Loved the title! You write terrific dialogue. It made the reading experience even better.
Noice
This is so cool. A screenplay/short story. Just loving this so much!