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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

Sorry I didn't read this before Halloween, but close enough. It was creepy and perfect for this darkening season.

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Janice Anne Wheeler's avatar

Your creativity rocks. Boooooo.....

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Pennie R. S. Nelson's avatar

Wow, I really enjoyed the creepy vibe from this story. Nice work David.

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Hein_and_Veronica's avatar

What a fascinating story, thanks David!

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Victoria Waddle's avatar

Ghoulish indeed!

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Douglas McClenaghan's avatar

Sex and the supernatural. What could possibly go wrong?

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Neil Shooter's avatar

Really enjoyed this! Shivers of the season to you!

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Dawn's avatar

Ok with the crazy domestics lol.

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Jim Melvin's avatar

Great story!!!!!

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Daniel Appleton's avatar

The " Monster's Club " movie had a vignette where a character befriended a young woman in a village of ghouls. He discovered what she is / was but helps her escape anyway. It DID NOT END WELL for either character.

Imagine an episode of the late 60s - early 70s " Love, American Style " with GHOULS & that would be this same vignette.

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Chris Andrews's avatar

Love it. Happy Halloween friend, or should I say fiend?

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E.R. Flynn's avatar

A ghoulishly great story! You've got a good knack for the horrific!

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Daniel Appleton's avatar

I heard thunder, the howling of a Wolf, & an old - fashioned pipe organ. SHIVERS.

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Yana Bostongirl's avatar

Whoa - didn't see that (ending) coming - caught me entirely off guard!

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Daniel Appleton's avatar

Stephen, AKA Sir Stephen of King, would approve. Or in the words of another pop cultural treasure : " IT'S PEOPLE ! ". Been YEARS since I last viewed Soylent Green.

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Jill Ebstein's avatar

A perfectly appropriate and creepy read for the night.

More than anything, I appreciate your range. You can spin quite a few stories and with so many voices.

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Tennent Untangled's avatar

Oooh, savage :) Love it.

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Linda Parkinson-Hardman's avatar

Nicely creepy for the time of year David :-)

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