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C. Lee McKenzie's avatar

Sorry I didn't read this before Halloween, but close enough. It was creepy and perfect for this darkening season.

Janice Anne Wheeler's avatar

Your creativity rocks. Boooooo.....

Pennie R. S. Nelson's avatar

Wow, I really enjoyed the creepy vibe from this story. Nice work David.

Hein_and_Veronica's avatar

What a fascinating story, thanks David!

Victoria Waddle's avatar

Ghoulish indeed!

Douglas McClenaghan's avatar

Sex and the supernatural. What could possibly go wrong?

Neil Shooter's avatar

Really enjoyed this! Shivers of the season to you!

Dawn's avatar

Ok with the crazy domestics lol.

Jim Melvin's avatar

Great story!!!!!

Daniel Appleton's avatar

The " Monster's Club " movie had a vignette where a character befriended a young woman in a village of ghouls. He discovered what she is / was but helps her escape anyway. It DID NOT END WELL for either character.

Imagine an episode of the late 60s - early 70s " Love, American Style " with GHOULS & that would be this same vignette.

Chris Andrews's avatar

Love it. Happy Halloween friend, or should I say fiend?

E.R. Flynn's avatar

A ghoulishly great story! You've got a good knack for the horrific!

Daniel Appleton's avatar

I heard thunder, the howling of a Wolf, & an old - fashioned pipe organ. SHIVERS.

Yana Bostongirl's avatar

Whoa - didn't see that (ending) coming - caught me entirely off guard!

Daniel Appleton's avatar

Stephen, AKA Sir Stephen of King, would approve. Or in the words of another pop cultural treasure : " IT'S PEOPLE ! ". Been YEARS since I last viewed Soylent Green.

Jill Ebstein's avatar

A perfectly appropriate and creepy read for the night.

More than anything, I appreciate your range. You can spin quite a few stories and with so many voices.

Tennent Untangled's avatar

Oooh, savage :) Love it.

Linda Parkinson-Hardman's avatar

Nicely creepy for the time of year David :-)