Stephen, AKA Sir Stephen of King, would approve. Or in the words of another pop cultural treasure : " IT'S PEOPLE ! ". Been YEARS since I last viewed Soylent Green.
David, that story was one wild Halloween ride. The character development was excellent, and Gary was a very mysterious character himself. For a bit, I thought he lived in Hawthorne house. The mysterious part of him didn't prepare you for his becoming Bronwen's next snack. Bravo!
Your storytelling in Ghoulfriend deftly captures the reader’s attention with its vivid imagery and well-paced narrative. Gary’s curiosity and Bronwen’s cunning play off each other brilliantly, leading to a climax that is both darkly humorous and chilling. It’s a masterful tale that showcases your talent for creating immersive, unsettling fiction. Brilliant!
Sorry I didn't read this before Halloween, but close enough. It was creepy and perfect for this darkening season.
Your creativity rocks. Boooooo.....
Wow, I really enjoyed the creepy vibe from this story. Nice work David.
What a fascinating story, thanks David!
Ghoulish indeed!
Sex and the supernatural. What could possibly go wrong?
Really enjoyed this! Shivers of the season to you!
Ok with the crazy domestics lol.
Love it. Happy Halloween friend, or should I say fiend?
A ghoulishly great story! You've got a good knack for the horrific!
I heard thunder, the howling of a Wolf, & an old - fashioned pipe organ. SHIVERS.
Whoa - didn't see that (ending) coming - caught me entirely off guard!
Stephen, AKA Sir Stephen of King, would approve. Or in the words of another pop cultural treasure : " IT'S PEOPLE ! ". Been YEARS since I last viewed Soylent Green.
Nicely creepy for the time of year David :-)
Who is better, Edgar Allen Poe or you with this creepy story?!
David, that story was one wild Halloween ride. The character development was excellent, and Gary was a very mysterious character himself. For a bit, I thought he lived in Hawthorne house. The mysterious part of him didn't prepare you for his becoming Bronwen's next snack. Bravo!
Your storytelling in Ghoulfriend deftly captures the reader’s attention with its vivid imagery and well-paced narrative. Gary’s curiosity and Bronwen’s cunning play off each other brilliantly, leading to a climax that is both darkly humorous and chilling. It’s a masterful tale that showcases your talent for creating immersive, unsettling fiction. Brilliant!
Great Halloween story David and nice to find you over here.