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Yana Bostongirl's avatar

Who doesn't like a happy ending? Good to know Candace and Finn were able to return home safely

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Leomhann Saorsa's avatar

Phineas and Ferb, Transformers and Bible mashup how much do I love this story? LOTS!!!!

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Paul Carr's avatar

A very enjoyable read!

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Jill Ebstein's avatar

David, also this line has many truths embodied in it:

But adventures are usually thrust upon you- you don’t choose to go on one.

I know you write for fun and fantasy and adventure, but what's cool about your writing is that sentences in themselves can go very deep if you take the time to really think about them. Thank you.

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Jill Ebstein's avatar

Right from the start, you had me chuckling. Love this line because that is what we become :(

But you aren’t a jaded, stiff-necked adult yet

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Virginia Neely's avatar

Great story. I really liked the transformers bit.

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Quite a tale! And you must be a Rumpole of the Bailey fan.

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