There are so many good lines and the characters are packed with imagination and fantasy. My favorite line because I think we could all say this, superhero or not:
"I know I have all those things- I just needed to be reminded."
I also like how you broke this into sections. Plus you spaced it well within sections. Nicely done.
A great story. The pace and flow are just a wonderful read. You have also nailed some classic lines. :)
Always amusing and interesting!
Cool name - Cinnamon Carractacus - and yes, I'm glad Muscle Girl realized the true power of her mind
There are so many good lines and the characters are packed with imagination and fantasy. My favorite line because I think we could all say this, superhero or not:
"I know I have all those things- I just needed to be reminded."
I also like how you broke this into sections. Plus you spaced it well within sections. Nicely done.
That story was fun and it packed a punch. "Whattalottawatta Falls" -- didn't see that coming.
Fun, entertaining read! A veritable lesson in there too. Use your mind, not only your muscles.
Thank you, David.
Have a great weekend! 🧡
Love this share ❤️. I'm encouraged to always keep my mind steady no matter what
I love the name Cinnamon Carractacus, but the story is great, if only everyone would use their brains instead of their brawn!
What a creative mind and moral too.
Wow David!