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Jessica Maison's avatar

As a fan of Friendship is Magic and anti-authoritarian stories, this was perfect and fun 🤩

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David Perlmutter's avatar

Thank you very much.

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Mkwawa shujaa's avatar

I love how you cloak real world themes of invasion, resistance, and gaslighting under layers of absurd, magical pony mayhem. Great prose overall

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David Perlmutter's avatar

The TV show I’m parodying here does it just as well; I just introduced a foreign element.

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Mkwawa shujaa's avatar

I might have to look at the show, even in YT

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Janice Anne Wheeler's avatar

I say again. Your imagination is a force and your skill commendable David!

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Richbee's avatar

Mustang Sally could be a stand in. Ranch somewhere in Nevada. A few Less expletives would drive the ponies to still get their points across. After all they have the powers of combining magical forces. I like the allegorical nature of this story, not as satirical as I think it could be. Greenland comes to mind. But Can-ade-ians will stir things up.

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Jon (Animated)'s avatar

Midnight Glitter’s voice is unhinged yet somehow relatable. Deranged in the best way.

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Yana Bostongirl's avatar

Interesting story about magical ponies standing up to invaders and fighting to protect their land👍

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Diana's avatar

seriously hysterical! Thanks David

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April Bannon's avatar

I loved this. Well done!!

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