David, first I love the feel, quick flow, less dense style. It was an easy and fun read. It really does feel like a whole new world. And then, laughed at this line:
"Do you wish to be the fastest, strongest and smartest one of your kind on Earth?" WHO DOESN'T?
Ah she's amazing. I can imagine a lot of children of my generation finding their own version of Tune-Ism. When I was a kid I convinced a little friend of mine that I was actually a fairy and I took him to fairy land. (He had to hold my hand and close his eyes while I took him up a hedgerow entry at the back of my garden.) Then I told him to open his eyes and he would see all the fairies. He totally went along with me and I loved him for that. Sad we have to grow up.
Oh, dear, asking spirits for powers. That usually ends badly. I just wrote about someone else's story like that and that's a plot point in one of my own as well.
Dear David, first of all, a huge thank you for supporting me. I have been extremely slow to fiction and yet there is so much great writing here!!! I thought of my near seven year old grandson and how he'd roar with laughter over this piece! It's a movie to me! Thank you again. oxox
She's an older creation of mine, just like my other ones, getting a new life here...
She is a fictional character. Unless otherwise noted, when I write about superheroes, it's fiction.
Love this imaginative story...Oh wait! She is a made-up character, right? You wrote her so well,. I hope I never run into her! :-)
David, first I love the feel, quick flow, less dense style. It was an easy and fun read. It really does feel like a whole new world. And then, laughed at this line:
"Do you wish to be the fastest, strongest and smartest one of your kind on Earth?" WHO DOESN'T?
Let’s go!
Tune -Ism indeed :)
Glad to make the acquaintance of Olivia - and Gridiron Girl and Jester
A female adolescent Hancock sans anger management & sans alcoholism ! The guy could be Ray.
Ah she's amazing. I can imagine a lot of children of my generation finding their own version of Tune-Ism. When I was a kid I convinced a little friend of mine that I was actually a fairy and I took him to fairy land. (He had to hold my hand and close his eyes while I took him up a hedgerow entry at the back of my garden.) Then I told him to open his eyes and he would see all the fairies. He totally went along with me and I loved him for that. Sad we have to grow up.
Oh, dear, asking spirits for powers. That usually ends badly. I just wrote about someone else's story like that and that's a plot point in one of my own as well.
Great stuff. The name Dixon reminds me of Dixon Hill from Star Trek TNG
Nicely!
This flows so well and bring you in so quickly, brilliant.
Dear David, first of all, a huge thank you for supporting me. I have been extremely slow to fiction and yet there is so much great writing here!!! I thought of my near seven year old grandson and how he'd roar with laughter over this piece! It's a movie to me! Thank you again. oxox